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DMC362 |
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all winner edition would be real cool
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Mr X819 |
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I don't know about an All-Winners version. I have a feeling that some non-winners could be better opportunities for Mario to write about. Like instead of
Danni, maybe somebody like Jamie or Rafe. Or instead of Tom, someone like Ian. Or instead of Earl, someone like Yau-Man ot even Alex. Or even instead of
Todd, someone like Jean-Robert or Peih-Gee.
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SenseiKreese |
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I'll tell you, I think a character like Ian would be really interesting to write. Out of all the post-Amazon characters, I think he would be #1 on my
list. Stephenie would probably be my #2. You could come up with some really good storylines for the two of them.
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kishuu |
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If you do write another All Stars, Courtney Yates, Jenna M or Heidi plox.
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DMC362 |
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Seriousily I wouldn't care who in it as along as it was written.
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DMC362 |
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so how is the story coming
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SenseiKreese |
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Day 34 is done. Just working on day 35 tonight.
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SenseiKreese |
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Hey there, I just wanted to reassure everyone that even though you haven't heard anything from me, it doesn't mean I'm slacking. I'm just
going without a working copy for this episode. What you're going to get is episode 12 in its final state all at once. So far it's about 60% done.
And I have to say that this is going to be a very fun episode. :) |
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SenseiKreese |
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I'm now about 80% done. It should be up soon.
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PJMichaelangelo |
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Woohoo!!!
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SenseiKreese |
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This should be a good episode. There are a ton of good character scenes.
It's fun when you get down to 5 players. Everybody gets the spotlight for a while. |
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SenseiKreese |
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The working (probably final) title for episode 12 is "The Last Supper." It's a good one. In fact it's so good that it will be up earlier
than I thought. The working copy is basically ready to go. Just a few quick edits and it will be ready. Give me 7 days at the most and it will be up.
Probably sooner.
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PJMichaelangelo |
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7 days?!?!?!?!?!?
No Survivor: Hawaii, no Mole... Guess it's back to the porno collection. |
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SenseiKreese |
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Bah don't tease me. If my stories ranked higher than porno, I'd be awfully flattered.
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SenseiKreese |
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Okay the working copy is done. Now I just have to decide how much I want to nitpick it. In any case, this is a neat episode. Lots of memorable scenes in
this one. It's probably the best final five episode I have ever written. It will be up soon.
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Maniacboy888 |
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Awesome. cant wait!
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Werwanderflugen |
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Can't wait for it!
(as well as the expected SK-CL story line/logic feuding!) |
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SenseiKreese |
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Ha ha. Glad you enjoyed that.
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PJMichaelangelo |
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I'm of course loving Day 34. I'm wondering just how long it will take John to realize he messed up and now has no chance of winning the game.
Because there's nothing the guy can now do to save his win. I love the fact that just because these players are all All-Stars doesn't mean they've
all got situational awareness. The biggest thing I've come away with from Survivor is that most players who lose do so because of their own myopia. They
lack the situational awareness necessary to fully understand just where they stand in their tribe and in the game. Alicia didn't have it. She really had
no clue she couldn't beat Colleen. And John didn't have it. He thinks he's a Survivor mastermind, but he loses his strategic compass when he gets
angry. CL was dead on. John's smart play was to get Alicia to angle for Tina to go home. And failing that, he should have directed the vote to Vee.
There was no reason to act right there and then. He and Alicia could have easily taken over the game at Final 5. All he had to do was have Alicia go back to
Gretchen and argue that breaking up Tina and Vee was more important than getting rid of John, and if Gretchen wanted her to go with the program they had to get
rid of one of them. John acts like he has no idea what's coming, and at TC we get a 3-3 tie, and at the revote John breaks ranks and votes out whoever the
target was. The remaining winner would be initially pissed, but would understand that John was unwilling to take a rock. Then John, Alicia, and the remaining
winner band together and vote out Gretchen, or if she won immunity, Colleen. At that point they're sitting pretty in the Final 4 and can almost coast into
the final TC together. Now however, John's all kinds of fucked. No matter what happens now, he's overtly fucking someone over. He has no cover to
hide behind.
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SenseiKreese |
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I don't know if I'd go so far as to say he has no chance. Remember, there are other changing and shifting variables besides John. At the moment he
doesn't have much of a chance, but that's not to say that in 2 days that might not change. There are some interesting things about to happen in this
episode.
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