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colleenlover |
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In Sensei I Trust
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PJMichaelangelo |
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SenseiKreese wrote: Is your site down, Mario? Whenever I try to access the WC, or for that matter any of the chapters, it times out.
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SenseiKreese |
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Yeah for some reason my web hosting service decided to switch URLs last night. Every link that starts www.acsn2.com/ should now start www.averdata.net/
http://www.averdata.net/~locbaseb/hawaii/hawaii_10_wc.htm All the pages are still there, they just have different names. It will take me a couple of days to go through and fix all the links. P.S. Unfortunately this change also wreaked havoc on the Funny 115. The links and pictures on that site will probably take weeks to fix, if not longer. Fricking Averdata. I wish they had warned me they were going to do this. |
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TheLurkerSpeaks |
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That link has less on it than I saw before at the other link - I think you lost some of your updates in the exchange.
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SenseiKreese |
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I didn't lose info, they just have an older version of the page. They must have moved the data over about a week ago. I'll reload the latest version
up to averdata tonight and that should fix the problem.
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SenseiKreese |
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Okay it should be all up to date now. There's nothing new though. I haven't worked on Hawaii in a couple of days.
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SenseiKreese |
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Hawaii update coming tonight.
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colleenlover |
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All right, I'm pysched! Really looking forward to it, and back into this.
I think it's going to get really messy now with a lot of hurt feelings, and of course making it a fun pressure cooker. Hmmm, actually I think the fall out of the vote this round will lead to the animosity for next episode. This one will all be about tension and paranoia. Wonder if Rob and Frank are getting along. |
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colleenlover |
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Arghhh! So good. Fully invested, and then then -to be continued!
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SenseiKreese |
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I hope to work on Hawaii a LOT today at work. So we'll see. I might be able to finish day 30 if I am lucky.
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colleenlover |
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This is looking really good, sensei. Tina won the final seven immunity originally and it was exciting because she was on the chopping block. This time
it's exciting because Tina has all the power.
The Vecepia/Tina angle is really great because they have to ally together, but also have to line up the votes to win -and your take on Vecepia going to Gretchen is perfect. Vecepia just wants things to go smoothly -and let Kekos have false hope from Tina and BAM! animosity -and hopefully Vecepia reaps the benefits from the jury -at least from Alicia and Gretchen (I don't think Vee will ever think she'll get Kathy's vote). I still don't see how Vee and Tina would target Gretchen this round -it's far too risky to make Colleen bolt (in their minds), and wonder if Tina and Vee have both gone to Colleen for at least the pretense of endgame deals. The real fun will be to hear Colleen and John compare notes and how to work this. |
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Hostile6 |
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http://members.aol.com/AllStarHawaii/
Mario, are you going to update the survivor weekly strategy columns with links? |
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SenseiKreese |
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I will after Hawaii is done. We're almost there. That's next on my agenda.
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SenseiKreese |
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Okay huge update tonight. Lots of good scenes. This episode is shaping up very nicely. The only thing I have to do now is finish it off, and then go back to
the earlier sections and synch everything up. I have to make sure the tone of the later scenes fits in and contrasts well with the earlier scenes. I
don't always know until I sit down to turn it into a final draft.
http://www.averdata.net/~locbaseb/hawaii/hawaii_10_wc.htm |
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colleenlover |
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uh-oh. Mountain lion on the loose. I have a feeling even if Haskell won in the end it would go like- "Congratulations, Colleen -one million dollars!!....
however, this check was written on an old ancient Indian burial ground and is cursed!"
This episode is looking very good indeed. Love the Ahi summit scene. Interesting about John and Alicia -at least from John's point of view. I still don't think he can risk her getting to the final two with him since he has the initial animosity of Tina and Frank (from Lex's boot) and then turning on others down the line if he goes with Alicia (and she has the whole no blood on her hands underdog) -but it makes sense that he needs a way to get Colleen and Vecepia into a final three with him, and a third that will still give him leverage. I can see where this might be going -and I won't jinx it by posting it. I think it's going to be a lot of fun. |
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Werwanderflugen |
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This is fantastic reading! I don't really know where this is headed... I find myself rooting for Vee and Tina, though I'm not sure why-- perhaps the
allure of seeing a former winner win again. All of them are very well-written, though.
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cardswin5 |
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i feel like an idiot.. i just found out i could read it b4 it was done wow...
oh well... really well written i am enjoying it... |
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SenseiKreese |
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Hey thanks. As I always say, the more new readers, the better. I think this episode is going to turn out to be pretty good. I should have the working copy
done in the next couple days, and then the fun begins once we hit the final six. Glad you guys are enjoying the story.
And I'm not kidding when I say that even I don't know who is going to win. There are two people who I am pretty sure are not going to win. But when it comes to the other four... well, anything goes. |
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colleenlover |
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It's absolutely great, Sensei. The foursome of Ahi is so delicate and fascinating- each one needs a different componant within that four -and making
deals with Keko is too risky now.
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SenseiKreese |
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Okay I posted two fun sections tonight. They are both still a tad clunky, but I love the idea behind them because they add a LOT of character development to the suddenly doomed Kekos. Once I get these two sections smoothed out in the final copy, they will be fantastic. I've been holding off on that Gretchen/Alicia scene for about ten episodes! |
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