SenseiKreese wrote:Well, Yankees did ask, and i was going to =P
I was going to ask the same question Yankees asked, but it seems like you cheated a bit to me. (and of course, this is tongue in cheek, because it's your story, but still). You picked a random immunity winner, and it was Alicia. So it seems to me that, if everyone went all out, Alicia would win. I also have no problem with the fact that she could decide to give up and hand immunity to Gretchen - IF, of course, Gretchen was the second last person standing. Of course, there's no guarantee that she would (as Vecepia could have very well been that person). In keeping with your random-selection of immunity winner process, it seemed only "fair" to me (and to your selection process) that you drew a second time to see who would be hanging there second last. Because, if it wasn't Gretchen, then your situation wouldn't have been feasible.
Yeah I knew someone would bring this up. Fine, just pretend that Alicia won immunity and then gave it to Gretchen. That was the real storyline behind this episode. I only wrote it the other way around because I thought it would be more memorable. I just had this idea of Gretchen hanging on for dear life and begging for help, and then Alicia saved her. Whether it fit my immunity roll or not is irrelevant. It still had the same effect as if I had written it the other way around. In 12 months, "the Gretchen begging on the rings" scene is one of those scenes that most readers of Hawaii are going to remember. And really, that's all that I care about. I like the big action drama scenes.
In my mind, how I got to the actual outcome of this episode is pretty much irrelevant. I mean, I did what the random drawing told me to do. Same outcome, different path. If Alicia HADN'T won immunity, Gretchen would have been toast. And I wouldn't have had a problem with that.
Look at it this way. If I did feel guilty about my immunity selection this episode, I wouldn't have mentioned it in my notes. You never would have even known about it.
I understand your answer and all, but if Alicia blatantly gave Gretchen immunity, then that gives John a lot more reason to give a big "screw you" to Alicia, as opposed to your scenario, where John has no definitive excuse to vote her out. And as you said, giving away immunity wasn't really an option until Amazon, I think.









