Yeah, I know it can be hard to do this sometimes, but hopefully within the next two episodes, all of my characters will be developed enough that you'll be able to have your own opinion about them. Mary is a good example of how this works: the first two weeks her popularity was in the low-mid 50s (probably due to low presence on the show and in my Ep 1) and now she got a MORP episode, and her popularity is almost 70. So sometimes those opinions can change, I think.Although Mary didn't really have a story on the show anyways, so you pretty much can do what you want with her character since she wasn't even shown on the show and there's no gameplay or personality to base her off of. ;)
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SURVIVOR: MICRONESIA FANFIC --- The Reunion Will Be Up Next Week (Wed?)
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Posts: 3207 (05/11/08 10:27 AM) |
Yeah, I always thought Mary had more potential than she showed on the real show, and I enjoy her character in my story.
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Posts: 7 (05/12/08 3:25 PM) |
Is Episode 3 going to get named soon or will it be "Undisclosed Title?" Undisclosed meaning you don't know yet or you don't want to say...?
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Posts: 3208 (05/12/08 3:34 PM) |
Is Episode 3 going to get named soon or will it be "Undisclosed Title?" Undisclosed meaning you don't know yet or you don't want to say...?Oh, since the last two seasons, I've started calling some episodes "Undisclosed Title" if the title would be too spoilery of what happens in the episode. I had a few complaints (rightfully so) before about the titles being too revealing, so I decided it was better to be safe than sorry. Episode 3 will be up early in the morning on Thursday. It's definitely the most eventful and exciting one so far. Lots of interesting strategy! :)
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Posts: 1146 (05/12/08 3:35 PM) Registered user |
With the horrible ending of Micronesia, I am putting my faith into this!
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Posts: 3209 (05/12/08 3:36 PM) |
With the horrible ending of Micronesia, I am putting my faith into this!Believe me, I agree with you on that. I won't let you down! :) |
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Posts: 16 (05/12/08 4:05 PM) |
im sick of people bitching about the micronesia final 2. The two of them played a solid game and truly deserved to win.
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Posts: 8 (05/12/08 5:53 PM) |
im sick of people bitching about the micronesia final 2. The two of them played a solid game and truly deserved to win.Exactly. I was rooting for Parvati anyways and I'm happy she won. Unlike Amber, she played a hardcore game and deserved it as much, if not more, than everybody else. |
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Posts: 3210 (05/13/08 9:13 AM) |
Here's the Episode 2 Edgic chart:
NOTES: 1) I decided to make Eliza a CPP. Only 2 or 3 people rated her this way, (most were CP neutral) but I reread the episode and felt that you were supposed to root for Eliza over Terry/Aras, and that the intent was positive in her favor. I'm still considering this a tentative rating and she might end up with a neutral or mixed if I think about it more and change my mind. 2) My intended rating for Mikey B was MORN4 but most people gave him MOR4 neutral, so I went with that. 3) Jason had 1 more vote for CPM than OTTM; however, my intention was OTTM for him because of his lack of self-awareness in many ways (as leader, about lying to Eliza, and possibly being voted off), and the one-sided way in which his Exile Island scheme was presented. So I tipped the scale in favor of OTTM. 4) And I also gave Aras the negative for association with Terry, and because Eliza and Terry/Aras should have been somewhat polarized with the two guys being negative and Eliza being (somewhat) positive. |
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Posts: 3214 (05/14/08 7:55 AM) |
Another 24ish hours until Episode 3 goes up! :)
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Posts: 1159 (05/14/08 6:25 PM) Registered user |
I wonder if Eliza is reading this :)
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Posts: 3216 (05/14/08 6:30 PM) |
I wonder if Eliza is reading this :)Well, I hope so. I've had quite a few Survivors read these in the past. So far this season, Kathy and Tracy both told me they would read it and Tracy said that she sent it to some of the other Fans, so I really appreciate her doing that and if even a few of them read it, that would be great! :) |
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Posts: 3217 (05/14/08 7:25 PM) |
Thanks, chad6. I will most likely change Eliza back to neutral when I do ratings for Episode 3, which by the way, is
now only about 12 hours away!
Remember, complex strategy in this one, so you'll have to be reading very carefully so that you understand the plans that are going on. Also, as I said, there's a few similarities to events that happened on the show, but I don't think that takes away from the episode. It's mostly page 14 on that's the really good part... |
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Posts: 1548 (05/14/08 9:27 PM) Registered user |
I'm excited for episode 3. Especially since the show is now over. I'm really interested in the complex strategy part as you say will occur. It will be
interesting to see who is playing for short term and who is playing for long term. Can't wait.
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Posts: 3218 (05/15/08 8:24 AM) |
I'm excited for episode 3. Especially since the show is now over. I'm really interested in the complex strategy part as you say will occur. It will be interesting to see who is playing for short term and who is playing for long term. Can't wait.Glad you're excited. It will be up in about 20 minutes. I just need to do a few last-minute editing things to get everything just right. :) This episode is the first in a series of really good ones, I think. Episode 4 might even be a bit better! |
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Episode 3 - Undisclosed Title
Jeff Probst: <narration> Previously on Survivor… <'Dissent' plays, as the infrared camera shows a view of the moon illuminating the night sky, and then fades out to show the Malakal tribe's flag> Jeff Probst: <narration> Aras and Terry's mystery vote for Sherea caused disarray within the tribe of Favorites… <Sherea can be seen turning her head, before the camera scrolls over to Ami> Ami: Eliza, was it you? <The infrared camera then turns to Eliza> Eliza: <to Ami> No, it wasn't me! Why would you even ask that? <Aras is shown subtly smiling> Jeff Probst: <narration> …and threw suspicion onto Eliza. <Ami, Brooke, and Aras are shown next> Aras: Here's the thing: <short pause> she was working it the other day. <Ami nods her head in agreement> She did not want Dave to go… <The camera zooms back in on Brooke> Jeff Probst: <narration> But Brooke and Ami were skeptical of their story. <Ami is now shown> Ami - CONFESSIONAL: I mean, I don't trust Eliza in this game right now, but I don't trust Aras and Terry more, so <long pause> I haven't figured out which one of them's gonna go first yet… <The camera fades out to show a clip of Brooke and Ami both laughing> Brooke: You have to be a better liar than that to make it in this game! <A close-up view of the Airai tribe's flag is shown, before the camera cuts ahead to show the castaways gathered in a group> Jeff Probst: <narration> At Airai, Jason took over Tracy's position as the tribe leader, <The camera scrolls across several Fans, and then zooms in on Jason> but the Fans continued to flounder. <Mikey is shown chopping at a coconut with the machete, as the blade hits the side of the coconut, and the coconut deflects a few feet off to the side> Mikey - CONFESSIONAL: It's somewhat of a comedy show around here. <Mary is shown, as she asks "Hit this?"> We're clearly out of our element; we have no idea what we're doing. <The camera goes back to Mikey, who has a frustrated look on his face> Wow. It's embarrassing that we suck this bad… <laughs> <An expressionless Kathy is shown, as she scrapes the flint with the machete> Jeff Probst: <narration> The tribe of Fans began a downward spiral: <A clip from the Reward Challenge is shown, as Eliza, Ruth Marie, and Earl are shown decoding a word puzzle> Eliza: <talking aloud> If you win this Reward, you are "VICTORIOUS." <Earl writes "VICT" down> Jeff Probst: <narration> First, they lost valuable fishing gear at the Reward Challenge. <Eliza says "Oh my God; that's it!" as the camera shows Jeff checking over their answer word: VICTORIOUS> Jeff Probst: <shouting> Favorites win Reward! <A prominent drumbeat is heard, as the camera shows the excited Malakal members hugging and cheering> Jeff Probst: <narration> Then, at the Immunity Challenge, <Quick views of two groups of Favorites pushing wooden barrels are shown> the Favorites won another close battle. <A wide view of the nine Favorites carrying their heavy flagpole over to its slot and drop it in. Jeff is shown raising his arms> Jeff Probst: <shouting> Favorites win Immunity! <'Heroes' begins to play, as the camera shows Aras and Terry both shouting "Yes!" and then zooms out to show the excited Malakal members hugging> Jeff Probst: <narration> On Exile Island, <The camera fades into a view of Jason and Eliza being boated to Exile Island> Jason came up with a scheme to tell Eliza false information about his tribe. Jason: Um, <pause> you know, Joel is our tribe leader and he has an alliance with Tracy, Erik, and Natalie. <Eliza can now be seen looking up, as she says "Mental note"> Jeff Probst: <narration> But when he returned to camp and revealed the plan to his tribemates, <A view of Jason is shown, as he sits down in the shelter with several Airai members> they got angry. Jason: I have to say, I think my idea was brilliant… <Joel now shakes his head out of frustration> Joel: <talking loudly> It's brilliant for you, but you just screwed us over because now they're gonna think we got a [censored] alliance! <Mikey smiles and shakes his head, before Erik is shown> Erik - CONFESSIONAL: Right now, I would almost want to get rid of Jason at the first opportunity… Jeff Probst: <narration> But Erik's motives for wanting to take his biggest threat out of the game also included jealousy. <The camera continues to focus on Erik for a few seconds> Erik - CONFESSIONAL: He has individual Immunity at our first Tribal Council, plus he's getting to spend one-on-one time with Eliza on Exile Island; <Erik can be seen putting a lime into his mouth> I want to get to know Eliza, you know? <A worn-out Chet is then shown walking over to his tribemates> Chet: Guys, I think we need to have a talk before Tribal tonight… <A frustrated Natalie is shown> Jeff Probst: <narration> With Jason immune and unable to be voted out, <A clip of Jason putting the Immunity necklace around his neck is shown> Chet announced that he was ready to leave the game. Chet: I'm the weakest person on the tribe, okay? <A prominent sound is heard, as Mary looks up> At this point, there's no getting around that, so in order for you guys to win, I need to be voted out tonight. <The camera then cuts ahead to show a clip of Erik, Joel, Mikey, and Mary talking> Mikey: Yeah, so <long pause> Chet, Jason… <Rapid clips of both Chet and Jason are shown> Done. Jeff Probst: <narration> The tribe agreed to grant him his wish, <An aerial view of the Tribal Council village is shown, before the camera shows Jeff revealing the final vote for Chet> and at Tribal Council, he was unanimously voted out. <Chet is shown placing his torch into the slot in front of Jeff> Jeff Probst: Chet, the tribe has spoken. <The camera now shows Jeff snuffing out Chet's torch> Chet: Well, <pause> it's my pleasure. They're gonna win this. <Mary is heard saying "Bye, Chet"> Jeff Probst: <narration> Eighteen are left. <A wide view of the nine remaining Airai members is shown> Who will be voted out tonight? <The camera shows the nine Fans grabbing their torches, and then zooms out to show them walking out of the Tribal Council village, as the screen fades out> Opening Credits: 'Ancient Voices of Micronesia' begins to play, as the camera shows a color-enhanced clip of Palauan warriors striking each other with war clubs, before a traditional wooden mask flashes onto the screen for a quick second. The Survivor: Micronesia logo is then shown, before the camera fades out to show a war canoe being paddled by several Native men and women. The words "20 Castaways" now appear, as the camera shows a rapid clip of a beautiful channel of water, and then abruptly cuts ahead to show the Airai ("Fans") tribe's orange challenge flag. A clip of Kathy picking up a palm frond is shown, before the camera shows a medium-sized photo of her with smoke around it. Mary is now shown running during the first Immunity Challenge. She is then shown smiling in a brightly-colored photo with water running down the right side of it. The camera fades out to show Joel chopping into a coconut with the machete. A close-up view of the coconut is shown, before a color-enhanced photo of him flashes onto the screen and the camera quickly zooms in on it. Transitional footage of more Palauan Natives rowing a war canoe is now shown. The next castaway to be shown is Tracy. She is shown walking along the beach, and then smiling in a black-and-white photo in the middle in the screen. The camera now shows a close-up view of Mikey walking in front of his tribe's shelter. A large brightly colored photo of him is shown, before the camera fades into a clip of Chet dragging palm fronds along the beach and then cuts ahead to show a medium-sized photo of him. An aerial view of several beautiful tropical islands is shown, as the camera rapidly scrolls around them, and then shows a clip of a manta ray gliding through the shallow ocean waters. Erik is now shown swimming during a water challenge, as the camera fades out to show a color-enhanced photo of him with flames surrounding it and burning the bottom-right corner. Natalie can be seen high-fiving another tribe member before the camera shows a photo of her along the left side of the screen, as smoke billows around it. A clip of Alexis rowing her tribe's canoe is shown, before the camera shows a color-enhanced photo of her, and then fades out to show Jason sitting on the beach. The camera now shows a photo of him smiling, as flames flare up around it. The camera rapidly zooms in on it, and then cuts ahead to show a torch being snuffed out. The worlds "39 Days" appear, as the camera shows a fast-forwarded view of the clouds shifting in the sky above several tropical islands. A Micronesian tribal carving is then shown, as the camera shows many quick views of it and then abruptly cuts ahead to show a close-up view of the Malakal ("Favorites") tribe's purple challenge flag. A clip of Ian walking through the shallow ocean waters is shown, before the camera fades out to show a photo of him with water running across it. Ami is then shown carrying a coconut, as she walks along the beach. The camera shows a faraway photo of her, and then quickly zooms in on it, before fading out to show several rapid clips from the first Immunity Challenge. Dave can be seen attempting to start a fire by frantically rubbing sticks together, before the camera shows him grinning in a close-up photo along the right side of the screen. A clip of Brooke standing on the beach with her hands on her hips is then shown. A color-enhanced photo of her then flashes onto the screen, as the camera shows an overhead view of Palau's Rock Islands and then cuts ahead to show a reef shark swimming towards the camera. The next castaway to be shown is Earl. He can be seen drinking from a coconut, and then smiling in a brightly colored photo in the middle of the screen. A close-up view of Terry swimming during a challenge is shown, before the camera fades into a black-and-white photo of him that is partially obscured by dark sand. A wide view of the ocean is shown. The camera shows a clip of Eliza riding in the cart during the first Immunity Challenge. The camera now shows her smiling widely in a large close-up photo with flames surrounding it. Ruth Marie is now shown walking in front of her tribe's shelter, before the camera shows a faraway photo of her with smoke billowing around it. Sherea is shown in a clip from the first Immunity Challenge, and then in a medium-sized color-enhanced photo. The last castaway to be shown is Aras. He can be seen hauling a long bamboo pole over his shoulders and then tossing it, before the camera fades into a brightly colored photo of him that is partially covered by water. The camera shows a darkened view of the spooky Tribal Council village and scrolls across many shadowy figures and burning torches. The silhouette of a castaway standing alone in front of a traditional 'bai' and holding up a torch triumphantly can be seen next, as the words "1 Survivor" appear on the screen. Many rapid and indistinguishable images continue to flash onto the screen, before the camera shows the Survivor: Micronesia logo carved into an oar and focuses on it for a few seconds. The theme music finishes, as the screen fades out. |
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Airai Tribe ("Fans") - Day 7
<The camera shows a fast-forwarded view of the sky, as nighttime turns to dawn, and the sun begins to peak through the dark clouds. The camera continues to show the red-orange sky, and then fades out to show the tops of several palm trees, before scrolling down to show the Airai tribe's flag. Several castaways are then shown gathered around their fire pit> Mikey: Let's get ready to get some fire! <Jason can now be seen striking the flint with the machete, as several sparks are generated and Kathy says "Keep going"> Joel: Blow… <Jason gently blows on the smoking kindling, before an anxious Mary is shown> Mary: That's good; that's good. <An upbeat music begins to play, as a fire quickly ignites, and the camera shows the other Airai members hugging and cheering excitedly> Jason: I was having doubts for a while… <The camera now scrolls over to a smiling Natalie> Natalie - CONFESSIONAL: It was such a relief when we made fire. <Erik is then shown with an unimpressed look on his face> Jason really stepped it up this morning; <short pause> he took the flint and just got everything prepared for fire. <A close-up view of Airai's burning fire is shown> We finally found some dry wood, and before you knew it, it just caught… <Alexis and Mary are shown smiling with their arms around each other> Alexis: Oh, beautiful fire. It feels so good! <laughs> <The camera then zooms in on Mary> Mary: Our first fire! <Natalie high-fives a grinning Jason, before the camera turns to Kathy> Kathy: <to Natalie> Hey, gimme five too, girl. <Erik is shown standing off to the side, before the camera cuts ahead to show a wide view of several Airai members> Jason: Now we need to get some sticks; <short pause> you know, I would like us to build some kind of shelter to go over the fire so it stays dry… <Mary is shown nodding her head> Mary - CONFESSIONAL: I think it's been pretty apparent from the very beginning that Jason is a really hard worker; <Jason can be seen carrying a heavy log over his head> he's been providing a lot, <Another clip of Jason is shown, as he eats a piece of clam> basically working 24/7 on searching for firewood, making sure we have coconut at all times… <A view of several chopped coconuts lined up on a log is shown, before the camera turns to Mary> Mary: <to Jason> Oh my God; you're crazy… <laughs> <Jason is shown looking up, as he says "I've chopped many coconuts in my life"> Mary - CONFESSIONAL: <continued> I feel like I'm also working constantly, you know, helping in any way I possibly can, <A view of Mary is shown, as she hands a coconut to Kathy> and I'm relatively comfortable that we could survive as a tribe without Jason… <There is a prominent drumbeat, as the camera cuts ahead to show a clip of Alexis, Erik, Mikey, Joel, Mary, and Natalie sitting around the fire in the midst of a conversation> Alexis: …because when in your life do you not eat? <Erik can be heard saying "True"> Mikey - CONFESSIONAL: Our diet, you know, what we've been living off of for seven days, consists of coconuts, <A clip of Mikey scraping the fleshy meat out of a coconut> these little limes, <The camera shows Jason holding up an unripe lime> and raw clams. <Kathy is now shown pulling the slimy meat out of a clam> That's all we've had: <short pause> the three major things we've had, and that gets old. <Another view of Mikey is shown next> It's not very tasty, for one, so <pause> I'm ready for a change of somethin'. <'Distant Land' begins to play, as the camera shows an aerial view of Jason swimming in the shallow ocean waters, and the sunlight sparkles off of the calm waves. An underwater clip of Jason swimming at the surface is then shown, as the camera focuses on him for a few seconds> Jason - CONFESSIONAL: Because Airai lost the basket of fishing gear at the first Reward Challenge, <A wide view of a rocky coral reef is then shown, as many small fish dart around> I decided to carve a spear during my time on Exile Island, <Jason can be seen carrying a makeshift spear, as he swims> so today, I'll give it a try; <short pause> you know, hopefully put it to good use and get us some, uh, protein before the next Reward Challenge. <A clip of Jason stabbing his spear into a small fish is shown, as he grabs it with his other hand and then emerges from the water with it> Jason: <to camera> Well, he fits right in the palm of my hand; <The camera zooms in on the striped fish, as Jason holds it up> I'll just have to try and get another one… <Another overhead view of Jason swimming in the shallow ocean waters is then shown> Jason - CONFESSIONAL: Coming out here to be a contestant on Survivor has always been a dream of mine. <Another clip of Jason impaling a fish on his makeshift spear is shown> I definitely would consider myself a fish out of water. <The underwater camera now shows Jason swimming downwards, as he looks around a rocky area> You know, I grew up in the U.S. Virgin Islands, which is a similar tropical setting as this, so <long pause> I'm definitely an outdoorsy guy, <The camera cuts ahead to show Jason slicing into one of the fish> and being able to test myself out in the wilderness is one of the things I've enjoyed about the game the most. <Another clip of Jason walking in the shallow ocean waters is then shown, as he quickly reaches down and picks up a crab> Jason: I just got three crabs… <A faraway view of Kathy standing on the beach is shown, as she asks "Big ones?!" Jason can then be heard saying something inaudible. An eerie shift in the music occurs, as the camera shows Erik watchfully sitting under a palm tree> Erik - CONFESSIONAL: Personally, I like Jason a lot, but I don't know if I can trust him right now. <The camera shows a clip of Jason carrying an armful of firewood> I mean, he contributes a lot to camp; <Jason now tosses the firewood down by the fire> he's amazing in the water; <short pause> I mean, it's ridiculous how good he is, but at this point, I feel like the tribe is relying a little too much on Jason, <Jason is shown holding a pot, as he says "I'll go grab some water"> and that I would be able to show more of my strengths without him. <The camera now cuts ahead to show Jason putting the pot of water over the fire> Kathy: <to Jason> You're a workhorse… <The camera then shows Erik standing nearby> Erik: Jason, you wanna go get some coconuts in a little bit? <Jason turns towards Erik> Jason: <to Erik> Yeah; just give me, like, five so I can get this water boiling here, <Erik can be heard saying "Okay"> and then we can go. <Another close-up view of Erik is shown next> Erik - CONFESSIONAL: Jason grew up on an island, whereas I grew up in my small town of Pinckney, Michigan. <A clip of Erik and Jason walking along the beach together is shown> You know, I'm just learning a lot of this stuff for the first time, <The camera now shows Jason climbing up a coconut tree> and <pause> I want to make myself an asset to this tribe. <Erik is now shown looking up, as he shields his eyes from the sun> Erik: <talking loudly> Watch your step! <Jason drops a coconut down and says "Don't worry"> Erik - CONFESSIONAL: <continued> I want to learn as much as possible from Jason, soak up as much of his knowledge as I possibly can, <The camera cuts ahead to show Jason chopping into a coconut several times, as he says "Nice, juicy one"> but <long pause> at the same time, I kindof feel bad because he's doing all of this stuff for the tribe, <Jason now chops into another coconut> and he's gonna be voted off next time we go to Tribal Council. <A comical music begins to play, as the camera cuts ahead to show another clip of both Erik and Jason talking on the beach and chopping coconuts> Erik: <to Jason> I'm like dying to meet Eliza. <Jason now replies "I know; I know"> I can't believe that you got to spend time with her on Exile. <There is an awkward silence, as the camera continues to focus on Erik> Did she even say anything about me? <Jason is shown> Jason: <to Erik> Um, <short pause> their whole tribe gave us all nicknames, and we're Thing 1 and Thing 2… <A close-up view of a horrified Erik is then shown> Erik: Oh my God; I need to cut my dumb hair with the machete… <The camera then switches angles to show Jason again, as he chops into another coconut> Jason - CONFESSIONAL: I can definitely see why I would be a threat to Erik because he really wants to be more of a provider, <Erik is shown drinking from a coconut, before he says "Totally full"> and I know he has a huge crush on Eliza as well, <laughs> so <pause> I think he views me more as competition for him than as a potential ally. <Jason is shown again> Jason: <to Erik> Eliza has a boyfriend already! <The camera turns back to Erik> Erik: I don't even mean, like, romantically; <short pause> I legitimately want to get to know her and spend some time with her in this game. <Another close-up view of Jason is shown> | ||
